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Whip, Bam, Zip, Zum
Over the hill we go.
Trying, Striving
Wishing, Hoping
To get over the rainbow

Never stop running, jumping
It gets you that much closer
Taking you that much farther
To the top
Of the rainbow

Fast like lightning
Our feet thump,thump,thump
Loudly on the earth
We're running
Starting our mission
To get over the rainbow

Light as a feather
We jump to the sky
Our bodies weightless
As we travel through the air
To get over the rainbow

Almost there, we are, we are
Almost made it, made it
Echos our voices below
Almost able to touch it now

The beautiful colors of the rainbow
Red, Orange, Yellow, Green Blue, Purple
So bright and so vivid
That's all it took
For us to want to jump
Over the beautiful rainbow

Now we are falling, down, down to the earth
Nothing slowing us
The loud deafening "shhhhhhh!" in our ears
We grow closer to the ground
We touch the ground, unharmed.
We gaze at the beautiful phenomenon
The magic is clear
You just have to jump over the rainbow.
I wrote this peom for my creative writing class. I like how it turned out. tell me what you guys think.
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ocurro Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I couldn't stop thinking of My Little Pony while reading it
XxXlove-dark-moonXxX Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I actually wrote this before I liked MLP XD
ocurro Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
+10 for avant-gardism ;)
XxXlove-dark-moonXxX Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
for...whaaat? o.o o.e idk what that is XD
ocurro Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
from french 'avant-garde' :P not difficult to decipher
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